Friday, 9 December 2016

Creative Journal - Previous Narrative/Storyboard

0:00 – 0:15:         Narrative speech
                                Montage of shots – library, shopping, school, street (Evening), Gym.
                                Fade to black
Verse 1
0:15 - Line 3:       Fade in
                                Close up of Sian
                                Slow zoom out to medium shot
Line 4 –Line 5:    Model at photoshoot being adjusted (clothes and make up)
Line 6:                   Extreme close up of eyes
Line 7 – Line 9:   Cut to long shot of model
                                Photo flashes and pose
                                Cut to side (diagonal) medium shot
                                Photographer walks over, slow motion shouting (model not posing right)
                                Medium shot of friend looking awkward and sympathetic
                                Cut to close up of model, rolls eyes and walks away
Chorus
Line 1 – Line 2:                   Singing in field, wide shot
                (Line 2)                 Cut to medium long shot singing
Line 3 –Line 5:                    Sitting for a coffee with friend, pan of table, laughing
                                                Two shot of model laughing with friend
                                                Four shot of table, one friend saying something, everyone laugh and drink
Line 6 – Line 8:                   Medium close up singing in field
                                                Cut to backward tracking, walking through field.
                                                Camera stops, walk past camera whilst singing.
Line 9:                                   Over the shoulder shot, text received.
Text reads from Manager– “My house at 7 tonight. Potential job offer over dinner”
Verse 2
Line 1 – Line 2                     Close up of sign for the restaurant
Cut to restaurant with model and 3 others sitting for a meal, four shot
                                                Medium close up of one person making a joke about model
                                                Two shot of other two people laughing
                                                Medium close up of model looking awkward, “I’m going to the toilet”
                                                Side medium shot of model leaving
Line 3                                     Model goes to bathroom and looks into the mirror, over the shoulder shot
                                                Looks at herself, turns to the side to see how skinny she is
Line 4 – Line 5                     “What’s a little bit of hunger” she says, view of model in mirror
(Line 5)                 “I could go a little while longer” model begins to leave

Line 6                                     Outside restaurant, four shot, saying goodbye.
                                                ‘Manager’ shows hand gesture to say “well?”
                                                Two shot of other people saying no, hand gestures
Line 7                                     Manager starts fake laughing, begins to get angry
Line 8 – 9                              Two others shake their head and begin to walk away
                                                Manager starts over reacting, angry
Line 10                                  Manager begins to yell at model, argument
                                                Model walks off
Line 11                                  Light transition, ball of light emerges into a flash.
                                                Cut to next scene
Chorus
Line 1 – Line 2                     Walking through water park singing, backward tracking
Line 3 – Line 5                     Fast fade
Walking through village, different angles, looking around dramatically for escape
Line 6 – Line 7                     Cut to walking through the water park singing
Line 8                                     Lean against wall, Extreme close up of getting pill
                                                Medium close up taking pill
Line 9                                     Slide down wall, lean head back
Bridge
Line 1 – 6                              Model stood in field in front of group of people in line
                                                Model singing the main parts
                                                Background people sing brackets
Line 7                                     Close up of model singing
Chorus
Line 1 – Line 2                    Medium two shot, model and friend dancing in field laughing
                                                Cut to medium long shot of model jumping on back (piggy back)
                (Line 2)                 Slow motion running through
Line 3 – Line 4                     Model falls off, long shot
                                                Cut to laughing, Medium close up
Line 5                                     Wide shot, model singing to camera
Line 6                                     Hand held, playful singing, over dramatic
Line 7 – Line 8                     Long/wide shot, friends walking in a line, laughing
                                                Cut to side medium shot or friends laughing and walking
Line 9                                     Model singing in the middle of friends
                                                Friends split and walk around camera
                                                Camera tilts down

                                                Fade to black

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